ENG 100 SMC Modern Day Racism African American Criticism Discussed

I wrote the essay about marginalization and how the singer shows that in the video and still my professor needs more evidence according to the article and the formation video. I didn’t know how should i replace the useful and informative point in my Essay that’s why it seems like at some part i repeat something without i know it or did not have more prove .I sent a draft to my professor and she told me what my essay needs. i would appreciate if you add some good point to it. i want to keep the style that i wrote it.so not very difficult words please. ‘for critical theory page 359 to 409 plus Watching the ‘Formation” video by Beyonce.