ENGL 1A San Jose State University Life Changing Experience Revision Essay.
Requirements for the revision essay:
*Lowered word count: 1000 – 1100 words. Nothing over 1100 words will be accepted.
Remove and replace one paragraph completely.
Make structural changes and add/replace details throughout the essay.
Make significant changes to either the opening or closing paragraph.
Underline all changes.
Remember: You’re telling a story.
On a separate page, write a paragraph detailing the changes and why you made them. Also, make a detailed outline of the original essay and the revised version.
I will give you the manuscript